A short Jamingtons entry.

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Edit: Changed some fonts & BG colors; the original jam game is still able to be downloaded, while the update is the browser version.

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StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5, Windows, macOS, Linux, Android
Rating
Rated 3.0 out of 5 stars
(1 total ratings)
AuthorNaomi Norbez (call me Bez)
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsAbstract, death, Female Protagonist, Short, Twine

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9thcircle7 years ago(+1)

Likes:

  • Good choice of font
  • Female Reaper is a nice twist. Only other example of that I can think of is Susan Sto Helit from Pratchett's Discworld series.
  • Writing is descriptive and nuanced
Dislikes:
  • Final "sting" is weak as you've already made the big reveal in the game description
  • Entirely linear and non-interactive. This isn't necessarily a fault but in this case I think it weakens the entry a bit.
Good work.
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