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9thcircle
7 years ago
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Good choice of font
Female Reaper is a nice twist. Only other example of that I can think of is Susan Sto Helit from Pratchett's Discworld series.
Writing is descriptive and nuanced
Dislikes:
Final "sting" is weak as you've already made the big reveal in the game description
Entirely linear and non-interactive. This isn't necessarily a fault but in this case I think it weakens the entry a bit.
Good work.
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